Nicolette V. Divine

[nicki]

Finished? Yesshhh


O N _ Y O U

Name/Alias:
Macki
Gender:
It is a…GIRL! :]]]]
Experience:
2 ½ Years
Location:
West Coast

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C H A R A C T E R _P R O F I L E

b a s i c s

Full Name:
Nicolette Victorie Divine
Age:
16
Gender:
Female
Date of Birth:
November 22nd
Tainted?
Yes
Ability:
Gyrokinesis _ also known as Gravitokinesis, is the ability to mentally manipulate gravitons and gravitational fields: the force of gravity on an object. Gravitokinetics are able to enhance gravitational pull or negate it altogether. The amount that this can be done is improved with practice. Note: you cannot fly faster than the terminal velocity of the average person (350kph/200mph) as the laws of physics would not allow it.

Nicki is barely able to lift small things and even if she does, she uses up all of her enegry. But when she’s very angry, she’ll lift very large things without her control. Though, the negative effect of her temper is that it’ll drain her of her energy making her pass out.
Beliefs:
She believes that nothing is impossible. I mean, if it is possible for Humans to fly, then anything is possible. That is what she believes in. After all, so many scientific things have been proven wrong because of the Tainted Blood.

She also believes that the Tainted and Untainted are not so different as many people may believe. The only real difference between them is that one has a great advantage, which is having super natural powers.


a p p e a r a n c e

Eyes:
Nicki actually has the exact same shade of eyes that belonged to her Grandmother. And is currently the only one who has such eyes, which area mixture of Gray, Ice blue, and hints of Brown. They seem to be able to pierce into people’s very soul, whenever she is mad. But whenever she’s happy or knows something that is just…great, her eyes will glitter as if they were jewels.
Hair:
Nicki ‘s hair is naturally straight and raven-black, but at times she curl the ends or just curl her hair! Or she’ll tie a bow into her glistening hair. But it doesn’t matter, cause she changes her style or just leaves it down. She never has the same hair style each day!!!Also, since she loves being unique, she may have pink strikes one day and dark red the next! Oh yeah, sometimes her tips or strikes shall tell you what mood she’s in!!
Height:
5’3 ½” {she still growing!!!}
Weight:
103 lb
Distinguishing Features:
Nothing seems to pop out besides her eyes and her pale completion, which seems to never have a blemish on it and perhaps her lips when she applies red lipstick or any other form of lip stick/lip gloss/chap stick. Oh yeah, she also has two piercings. And they both are on her ears, one is the regular piercing and the other one is on her upper cartilage on her left side.
Other:
Nicki wears all sorts of clothing, but nothing too girly. But her main style is a the emo-gothic-punk-rocker style. She just loves it and doesn’t care what other people think. Cause she is who is! She also tends to have different assortment of accessories on.


p e r s o n a l i t y

Likes:
Creative & Artistic Things ~ Which are, Writing, Art, and Photography. She just loves to write because it helps her express her emotions, hidden or shown. She also loves Art because of that, but also because of the beauty and how people can be talented and brilliant enough to create such master pieces; and the same goes for photography.
Reading ~ It is not just Nicki's favorite pass time but it also helps her go into a different world. It also helps her with her English and writings too.
Winter Sports & Aquatic Sports & Tennis ~ She just loves to Swim, Swimming because it doesn't matter if you are heavy you float up and it just feels great! She also loves to Snow Board, mainly because of the rush!!! Tennis, is just cool and amazing... And it is all done with two rackets, net, two players, and a ball...
Animals ~ Cute and cuddly and just wonderful! They all are Man's Best Friend, even if they are not dogs.
Pranking ~ Hehe...its just simply fun...
Every School Subject ~ They all are unique and great! And it also helps me learn about the world!!!
Sugary Things ~ Must I really go in depth with this one...? One, its SUGAR!! Two, it makes her hyper... And well...it tastes...GOOD!!!
Ballet & Ice Skating ~ Ice Skating...she is actually an Ice Skater and also...she loves the grace...beauty...and so many more things about this sport... And she does not consider Ice Skating a sport, in fact she believes it is a piece of art.
Cooking ~ I just LOVE cooking, it is amazing how you can create something from a different thing. It also is just wonderful how pretty your master piece looks in the end... And it also makes it so much harder to eat...BUT still...
Sleeping ~ Who seriously does not like this...?
Technology ~ Err...who doesn't like this one too?
Stuffed Animals ~ Cuddly, good friends, great listeners, great secret keepers... Umm...and a lot more stuff...
Kids ~ They are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute!!! And they are our future...
World ~ So many things that I can learn. Culture, languages, art, music, etc... And they all are unique and different. It also is amazing how we all are so interconnected.
Dislikes:
Animal Cruelty ~ Its unfair how some people treat animals... They have every right to be left alone AND in their natural habitat!!!
Her Disorders/Problems {Fainting Problem, Coughs up Blood, Weak Immune System}~ She HATES them...
Death ~ Too many things have been taken because of this...thing...
Being Called Short ~ Grrr....I AM NOT SHORT!!!!!!
Being In Pictures {She likes taking them ironically}~ She doesn't think she looks pretty in them...
Clowns {Any Sort of Clown evil looking or not} ~ She hated them after reading It...and seeing them the way they are... They are just creepy...
Too Much Make-Up ~ People who wear too much make-up remind her of Clowns... Who she hates...
Being Lied To ~ She rather have the truth than be lied to... And it also makes her feel...disregarded...
Traitors ~ They are just back-stabbing...son of bitches...
Guys Who Just Play With Emotions ~ They are just pricks...
Being Center of Attention ~ There are more people than just her...
Being Used ~ She is a human and she isn't just there for their usage...
Being Held Down ~ She has great potentional...she wants to prove it too!!!
Taste of Medicine ~ She's tasted one too many medicines...
The Good Points:
Witty & Intelligent
Charming & Sweet & Caring
Loyal & Brave
Shy & Secretive & Kind
Musical & Creative & Artistic
Sly & Cunning {when she wants to be}
Patient & Calm & Sensitive
Level-Headed
Fast Leaner
Optimistic {more of this than a pessimist}
The Bad Points:
Too Secretive
Doesn’t Forget Just Forgives {but it depends on the situation}
Her Problems
Stubborn {mainly when it comes to her beliefs}
Gets Stressed Easily
Unable to Relax
Phobias
Pessimistic {less of this than a optimist}
Pushes Herself Too Much
Habits:
Nicki’s head is almost always covered by a thick book. Let it be small or huge, she always seems to have a book with her. She also normally has a pencil or pen tucked behind her ear and she also seems to have some form of a notebook in her back pocket or bag.
Possessions/Obsessions/Other:
Whenever she goes out to the park, she’ll take some sort of instrument with her. Also whenever she is at home, she just LOVES to have a plushy or pillow in her arms or near her. She also has a room reserved for her animals and she’ll kill anyone that enters without her permission!!!
o r i g i n s

Place of Birth:
Sanglignée, France
Family:
Nicholas Divine – Father – Deceased - 34
Victorie Divine – Mother – Deceased - 32
Dracon Day – Adopted Father – 35
Aiden Day – Adopted Father - 34
Shadow Divine – Older Brother - 17
Adelaide Divine – Older Sister - 17
History:
On November 22nd, Victorie Divine was rushed to the hospital. And she stayed in the hospital for some time, because that was when Nicolette Victorie Divine was born. But because she was suppose to be born on December 5th, she was put into an incubator. She appeared to be fine, but that was until Nicki had caught her first cold. She was coughing, sneezing, and also running a fever. She also ended up going to the hospital, yet again, and they had found out that she naturally had a weak immune system. And also that her lungs were a bit messed up, and which she'd may end up coughing up blood if is stressed or very weak. She also may faint too, but that would only be when she was low on energy… And that was where it began…

From the loss of her maternal family to the gain of her adopted fathers, Nicolette has learned. Learned a lot more than someone would expect a young girl her age to learn and go through. She learned that Death…is something that is cruel and twisted. But there always will be a second chance to those who need it the most. That was her belief, till a few more things were taken from her. Her first crush who only toyed with emotions, her first boyfriend who was only using her, her first pet who died of old age, but all those things… Never got replaced…at least not replaced in her hearts. Dracon and Aiden replace Nicholas and Victorie as her parents, since Nicki was only 3 when they died. But of course they did not replace them completely.

But any ways, Nicki now has grown into a talented young lady; which is not surprising as how her elder siblings turned out. And just as expected, Nicolette Victorie Divine went into the upper classes…just like her brother and sister. She also excelled in them! She was a brilliant student, but no one seemed to see past that. So, she ended up being a loner in class… Unless they wanted a A+, which many did, so she ended up being used. Which made her angry as hell, making her not want partners for projects, unless necessary.

There also were many and I mean many concealed talents that no knew about, besides her class mates for the classes and her family. And they just happen to be Ice Skating, which she had started since the age 6, Gymnastics, she started at age 7 but quit at age 9, and Ballet, she started at age 6 but quitted at age 14. Those were her main hidden talents, that no one seemed to know about or want to know about… Well, at least it seemed to her that it was that way.

As the years rolled on by, the same things happened. But Nicki did indeed gain a few friends, which shocked her, and they were true friends, which only shocked her some more. And these few friends came to cheer her on, which ended up with her talents spreading like wild fire. But she didn’t care, because she then had a few friends who did not want to just use her. And if they did need help, Nicki was beyond happy to help them!

A few more years went on by and that was when Nicki’s power showed up. It happened when Nicki got a bit aggravated and lessened the gravity of her project, which was testing the acceleration of her Race Car which was built by hand. When this first happened, she thought it was just a mere hallucination. But this continued a few more times but with different objects, which finally she went to Aiden and Dracon. Who immediately began training her, along with Shade and Ali.

So, now Nicki has grown…a lot. But she also has LOADS of training to do… But one thing she DOES fear, is that her friends will become scared of her… Which she hopes will not happen. She also has joined the Junior Section in the Professional Ice Skating area. Her relationship with her siblings and parents also grew over the years but as soon as they found out that Nicki was also a Tainted their relationship grew much stronger.

m i s c

RP Sample:
{From a different site but still Nicki.}
Normally she would squirm and try to get out of the deadly hug that her twin sister, Alessandra, gave her, but this time Nicolette---correction Nicki accepted the deadly and killing embrace. But soon enough, Nicki began to squirm and yell and pout and most of all tried to kick her sister’s shins. Yet, nothing seemed to affect Alessandra… So, Nicki whispered in a quiet and sly tone, “If you do not let go...I’m gonna tell…you-know-who you have a HUGE crush on him!!!!”

And those words just did the trick! Because, Nicki was…FREE!!! She felt free but it did not last long. Because her sister wanted to kill her, and she said it pretty darn loudly too. Sooo, it was time to RUN and RUN for Ms. Nicolette Victorie Divine. She also was VERY glad that, she was the better one when it came to running.

As she continued to run, laughter escaped her lips and she called back, “Sooo…I guess you WANT me to tell him…RIGHT!?!?” More yelling escaped her elder twin sister and it ended up with laughter on Nicki’s side. But who would not laugh, by the amusing show that the two Divine Twin Sisters were putting on?

Well, Shawn, Alessandra’s Crush---FUTURE Husband, was laughing. Which ended up with a smirk crossing Nicki’s face, and since both twins had raven-black hair and since they both were running… It was kind of hard to tell the two apart. Soo…that was when Nicki’s evil yet brilliant plan came into action!!!

Quickly she sped up as she reached a curve, where Shawn was standing, and in a blink of an eye the cap that Shawn was wearing…POOFED!!! Everyone noticed that Nicki held it, but soon enough it was Alessandra who then held it! And with that done, Alessandra threw it back to Nicki. But Nicki was off running…soooo it fell to the ground

Laughter escaped Nicki, once again, and she called out, “Ohhh…Shawwwnnnieeeee-Pooooohhhh…if you want your hat back…you’ll have to come and get it!!!!” And well, since Alessandra was so near by the hat now… Nicki laughed some more. But she heard her sister curse at her some more, it did not bother her… One bit.

Character Model:
Carolanne Evans

[Nona Constantine]

OK… she’s been 16 for just over a month… there’s no way she’d have any control over her powers yet.


… no… she’s 16 years old and you’re telling me she’s into art, photography, painting, dancing, writing, ‘etc’, winter sports, aquatic sports, tennis, violin, piano, flute, guitar, singing, ‘etc’, Ice Skating, Gymnastics, and Ballet? AND she loves school? No. Not even an adult is that competent in so much, let alone a teen. There’s not enough hours in the days in her lifetime that she could know so much. Slim it down a bit?

[nicki]

Sorry, i've changed it.

[Nona Constantine]

You removed like, 4 things dude... you took out dancing and left ballet, took out painting and left art... o.O

If another admin disagrees with me, PM/IM me, but otherwise.... eh

[brandon]

-Randomly Plops In-

Well I just state.......yeah too much stuff to be doing but hell if she LIKES those things then she LIKES those things doesn't mean she is DOING all the activities.

[macki]

She likes art & photograph & ballet.
Though she use to be a ballet dancer, but she doesn't dance anymore.
She's just an Ice Skater.

[Nona Constantine]

Could you be more clear, clean it up and state which she practises/does and which she's just a fan of?

[nicki]

does that help?

[meg]

Macki,

Took a look at this (so someone would come in as a blank slate, since Kit's been working on it with you and it's easy to lose focus after awhile) and I think the changes you made in the 'likes' section help a lot. It's not so much that it's an issue that she ENJOYS all those things, the admin are just concerned that she not be GOOD at ALL of those things. No one, most especially at such a young age, would be. But there's a pretty big difference between, say, liking the piano and playing the piano like a prodigy. So long as that's not what you're going for, I think we're good on that point.

But that kind of brings me to the only thing that concerns me about this app. Theres so much going on, with all her interests, her talents, her illnesses.... it's a bit overwhelming, really. I find myself so focused on all these things she does, or likes or suffers with, that i lose who she actually is. No one's defined by the things they like, or the problems they have... it's what they DO. How they react, how those things shape them as people. And that's what i think is fading into the background a bit simply because there's SO much there taking away from it.

Now, I don't think thinning those things down is the only answer. You mentioned her talents in her history, but not all that much about her dislikes/bad points. Why/how is she sick? How long as she been this way? Is there a reason she's afraid of clowns and heights?

And even beyond that, what's her relationship like with her siblings? And her adoptive parents? How long has she been skating, etc? What is it about those things that appeals to her?

Just some things to think about, in order to 'flesh her out' a bit more. You've hit on the main points in her history, but now try and dig deeper. There's probably more to her than even you imagined.

[nicki]

Is this better Aidan?