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Post by osharic on Mar 12, 2008 22:04:17 GMT
Finished? YES!!!!
O N _ Y O U
Name/Alias: Izy Gender: n/a Experience: bunches! Location: here...
C H A R A C T E R _P R O F I L E
b a s i c s
Full Name: Osharic Asteri Age: 18 Gender: male Date of Birth: January 1 Tainted? yes Ability: Retrocognition he gained his power at sixteen and is fairly ok wit hihs power. He can't always choose when he has visions but he can't stop them if they come on their own. Beliefs: What humans don't know won't hurt them.... As long was people don't know what he is he'll be fine. He believes that everyone has darkness in them and that if humans knew about tainteds they would be harsh which they are. So he tells people just don't say anything.
a p p e a r a n c e
Eyes: Big and green Hair: wavy dirty blonde Height: 5' 11" he lies and says he's 6' Weight: thinish normalish around 150ish... he hasn't checked in a while Distinguishing Features: He has a very boyish face and a young appearance. He just recently shot up from being 5'3" so he's very clumsy, also when he looks into the past he has a kind of inward kind of look like he doesn't see you or anything. Other: He is young but he has seen more than most his age and his eyes have a look of being older than he is. He doesn't have a particular look he likes to dress usually in jeansand a t-shirt or collared shirt or something, his look doesn't particularly fit into any spacifc end of the spectrum his look varies he can wear black one day and looke completely goth and then the next day be wearing a bright white shirt and jeans.
p e r s o n a l i t y
Likes: cookies, sweets, airplanes, birds, warm weather, music, singing (even though he can't) Dislikes: cold, rejection, his pill, seeing dark pasts, useless people, ignorance, misunderstandings, vegetables The Good Points: He is working on his power, he can occationally get visions when he wants too but not all the time. He can see places, people, and thing's histories up to and unknown number of years. He swore he saw the dinosaur era once after he was having a seizure. He is very humorous and will tease the living daylights out of them if he gets the upper hand. He has used his power before to give anonymous hints to the police about robberies or murders. The Bad Points: He can't choose when he can or cannot have visions. He has Epilepsy. He can't fully control his power which is part of the problem. He sees mostly bad pasts unless he is revisiting someone else’s or his own memories by direct contact. He is useless in a fight or anything. He might try something but he definitely isn't the strongest or the one with the quickest reflexes to have on your side. Habits: He bites his nails and often uses slang when he isn't thinking properly. Possessions/Obsessions/Other: He has a cat called Alexander "Alex" in reference to Alexander the Great begin epileptic. It cat was black and had a white strip going from his nose to his tail and two strips of white crossing at his shoulder blades and at his hips. Alex Osharic knew, had never been a normal cat. The thing followed him everywhere, even if Oshairc never saw him. He basically just showed up and demanded to be taken in.
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Place of Birth: Marseille, France Family: Grandmother: Chrona Asteri Grandfather: Ikeni Asteri Mother: Astra Asteri Father: Omen Asteri Little Sister: Haara Asteri History: Osharic was born in France and ever since he was old enough to walk he had been best friends with a girl named Cassandra Onyx. They stayed best friend and she would confide in him must as much as he would confide in her. His little sister was the center of his life. He loved her more than anything. She was three years younger than he was and he would protect her against the bullies and meaner people. They were inseparable. And with Cassie they were a threesome. When he was twelve his family moved to America and Osharic had to leave his world behind including Cassandra. One day sitting in the field at recess he and Cassie pinky swore that they would meet again and Osharic pledged to marry her.
Osharic gradually forgot about that promise and lived on in America flirting with girls and dating. He was loosing his French side and becoming American. He lost most of his accent and traded it for an American one. He and his sister still stayed close by each other's side and every time someone had their eye on her Osharic would be right there keeping an eye on him. He began to hang out with a few kids his age who had strange powers. That was when he discovered his own power. One could manipulate fire another could read thoughts, someone could see the future and Osharic found that he could see into the past. He was sixteen at the time and completely ignorant of the cruelty of the world to the Tainted. That was when it all started. He began to avoid going home for his dreams were haunted by a unknown murder committed there some hundred years ago.
His parents took it as being disobedient and kept punishing him. They didn't know what was going on. When he was seventeen he finally told Haara that he could see into the past and when he did he had a vision and collapsed foaming at the mouth hand spasming. He'd woken from the vision in the hospital only to hear the word, seizure, and epilepsy used in the same sentence. The doctor gave him a permanent prescription that he could refill anywhere and his parents never looked at him the same way. They were very superstitious and saw it as a bad omen that he had seizures. Afraid for themselves and for Haara they sent him back to France hoping that that would help him get over his disease. So he returned to his hometown in his senior year. He was staying with his grandparents who thought he was gods grace no matter how much he flapped on the floor and screamed.
He loved his grandparents but he missed his sister deeply. She called one time to tell him that she had the same power that he had. One difference, while Oshairc's visions tended to see the dark pasts hers were lighter and more joyful. Not long after she fell sick. Deadly sick. The American doctors couldn't explain it and she suffered quietly wishing for her brother. His parents believing this was the bad omen that he had brought banished him from coming to see her. He would sneak in at night sometimes after he gained enough money to fly round trip just to see her once. She brightened and he took her outside to see the stars. She was so happy that he felt as though he would never have to leave her.
It ended thought and when he left she began to get worse. Their parents wouldn't let her go outside or anything which only made her feel isolated and depressed and slowly loosing the will to live. On top of all that he found Cassandra again and to his surprise she didn't remember him at all. He tried to convince her but it didn't work and he didn't know how to show her the past that had taken place between them. Osharic went about his life mostly in solitude and depression knowing his sister was sick and his best friend didn't even know who he was anymore and his parents hated him. The only thing that kept him going was the love of his grandparents. He loved them deeply and they supported him telling him stories of when they were young and to his surprise his grandmother had a power too. Opposite of him she could see the future. She used to put him through things where they would sit back to back and she would read the future and he would read the past and they would talk about it for hours. She told him that that was why she had changed her name from Sofia to Chrona after the Greek word chronos meaning time. Now at 18 he is hoping to get into a college of Neurology and he is trying to master his power and figure out why he has seizures when he has visions and is that the cause of his bad visions.
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RP Sample: (from Izy) Izar sighed and ruffled his hair slightly. It was again multicolored and the warmth of the temperature influenced him to wear a dark gray sleeveless shirt with a vest of army camouflage and black pants. He gazed at the mirror and changed one of the earrings he had in to one that was a little less large. He shifted the hoop in his nose and the ring in his lip. He grabbed some hair spray and sprayed heavily on a strand of hair that was vexingly not staying where it should be in the position of straight in the air. He smiled remembering when he first met Masinori and figured out that he wasn't the jerk that Izar had made him out to be. It had rained so hard Izar feared he'd never get his hair back to normal.
He opened his wings for a moment and looked them over. The black dye was fading. He sighed, he would let it. He was in a good mood most of the time now so it didn't feel right to dye them black again, at least for a while. He looked up at the sword hanging non a platform above the small couch. He left that at home more often now but by no mean did he ever go unarmed. You could say he was paranoid but he saw it as wise and others who went without foolhardy and happy go lucky. What are they gonna do if someone attacks them? Izar shrugged it off. He knew Masinori didn't carry weapons and that made him worry sometimes. "Bah!' He scolded himself, "You're like a mother hen." He walked out of his bathroom and slid a dagger in his pocket just in case and made his way out into the hallway, though not before hiding his wings.
He waved to his landlord, who waved lazily back, as he paced out the door. He was meeting Masinori today and at the moment he was running late. He squinted in the bright sunlight and smiled the air felt wonderful. Not polluted or disturbed by a storm or anything. It was as if the air reflected how the day would go and he hoped so. He grinned as he felt a slight pressure on his shoulder. He glanced over seeing a small Sylph had picked him for their perch. She laughed and pulled at his ear. He tilted his head to hear her. "Mamma says we have to work on the clouds today. Anything in mind?" He grinned, "Why don't you make a giant bird or something." She giggled and nodded flitting off to begin her work.
He beamed and walked into the square to look for Masinori. He looked about seeing many people in light clothing also enjoying the early heat. He stretched his arms and sighed with happiness. The sun felt warm on his skin and the colors mixing in the sunset. He smiled watching the winds shift to shape a form in the clouds. A giant bird was forming it;s wings spread wide. The Sylphs really were artists. The way they used the red light of the sunset made it appear like a phoenix in flight. He looked around then continued walking. Izar thought he saw him but the sun was in his eyes and he shaded them his one hand then turned to look across the square.
Izar's heart skipped a beat as he jumped at hands being placed on his shoulders. He turned only to be engulfed by a bear hug. There was only one person this could be. Masinori. Izar returned the embrace ignoring the odd looks cast at them by passer-byers. He released the hug and looked at Masinori, "Hey!" He said putting a hand over his heart feinting being out of breath. "Way to give someone a heart attack," he teased good natured raising an eyebrow at him. He smiled brightly, "How are you tonight?" He grinned squinting in the light. He shifted so that his eyes weren't in direct sunlight.
Izar chewed at his lip. There were so many things he was still hiding from Masinori and he regretted it. They might know quite a bit about each other but when it came down to it Izar realized he didn't know hardly anything about Masinori. Character Model: Jeremy Sumpter
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Post by brandon on Mar 15, 2008 2:38:56 GMT
-Need to say what he can do with his power at his age.
-Can you describe what his style is in the other section in appearance.
-What you wrote in the good points just confused me. The first sentence doesn't make much sense.
-Where in France?
-History is all good but maybe can you add like a time line of when things happened. Like...he was 16 when he got his powers and 17 when he moved back to France and so on and so fourth.
Sorry buddy but tis my job but hey just a small list of changes please to fix, minor changes. When you are finished then you may reply here that your all edited or PM me.
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Post by osharic on Mar 15, 2008 2:54:15 GMT
Ok I think I got all of it. I elaborated on the appearance and the good points (where it states how good he is with his power, etc.) I added the ages int omy history including when he got his powers and the years leading up to the present. If I didn't get all of it just tell me and I'll fix it! <3
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Post by brandon on Mar 15, 2008 3:15:29 GMT
Sorry, I meant can you add what he can do with his power in the ability section instead of just the name of the power. That is where your supposed to state what he can do with his power at his age. Then that is all you need to do.
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Post by osharic on Mar 15, 2008 19:43:24 GMT
Ok I think I got it this time!
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Post by brandon on Mar 15, 2008 19:45:02 GMT
APPROVED! Welcome to _TC. Since you have read the rules and the background story, your next stop should be The Model Claim to make sure no one else can use your model, Relationship Plots to build yourself a reputation, and then there’s just one thing left to do…
Have fun!
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