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Post by emiliomarcuccilli on Feb 16, 2008 5:57:52 GMT
Finished? yes just finished it
O N _ Y O U
Name/Alias: Jessica Gender: femaile Experience: 3 years Location: California (-8 GMT)
C H A R A C T E R _P R O F I L E
b a s i c s
Full Name: Emilio Vincentio Marcuccilli Age: 22 Gender: male Date of Birth: July 19 of 1986 Tainted? no Ability: N/a Beliefs: Emilio always used to support the tainted. He knows of them yes and his step mother is who showed him that not all tainted are bad. Since then he has been good to some tainted and not to others. No matter if someone is tainted or just normal or strong or weak or beautiful or not it doesn't matter to him because in the end life doesn't care about those things and neither does he. Ghosts and the paranormal is something that he is not sure of yet. He wants to believe in them but he still isn't sure if ghosts exist. He believes that everything happens for a reason and that every thing a person does has a ripple effect on everyone else.
a p p e a r a n c e
Eyes: Most of the time its hard to see Emilio's eye color because of how his eyebrows set on his face. His eye color though is a deep deep aqua blue. The only people who ever really see his eyes at least the eye color are those that are on good terms with Emilio or are extremely close to Emilio. The only time you see his eye color is when he is relaxed and he doesn't have a protective glare or a look of uncertainty on his face.
Hair: He has brown hair. His hair is not very dark but its not really light its in that in between. He normally has his hair short but long enough to style. His trademark hairstyle is spiked up with gel. His hair is not course but its not fine. Many people claim that his hair is soft, when there is no gel or hair styling products in his hair.
Height: Emilio gets his height from his father. Emilio stands at 6 foot and 4 1/2 inches. He is taller then his father who is only 6 foot 1 inch. Emilio likes his height. He feels its an advantage in this world to be so tall plus it makes him feel more superior to those who think they can do anything. He also likes his height because most of the girls at least in the city and all the other places in the world seem to aww in his height.
Weight: Emilio's weighs in at 245 lbs. on the average sometimes its a few pounds off. His body is extremely built. He has a abs and the strong arms. He legs are also built. Let's face it his whole body is built and he never let's himself have any kind of loose fat on him. He likes his body toned and that is the way he plans on keeping it. He is a former wrestler hence to why he keeps building himself up.
Distinguishing Features: Some of his features include his smirk that he does that is hard for most people to smirk back to. The fact on how muscular he is makes that a distinguishing feature. Unlike his sister he has no piercing instead he has seven tattoos. He has designed them all. He has three tattoos on his forearms, one on his upper back between his shoulder blades, then two on his upper arms or biceps. Other: Emilio wears all sorts of things. Mostly he wears a lot of button up shirts and almost in a business suit when it comes to business, such as real big dates or anything that has to deal with his jobs or interviews or anything that requires formal wear. He also wears a lot of basic and simple clothing such as wife beaters, jeans, tee shirts, hooded sweat shirts, and just the things that are in. He gets a lot of his clothes shipped in from the companies and designers that had created them. He does a lot of endorsements so he ends up wearing a lot of the fashion clothing that he likes before they are even released in stores. His sister, Toni, even makes him clothes in which he wears and enjoys wearing most of the time.
p e r s o n a l i t y
Likes: - Working out - Hanging out with friends - Sports :
- Cars - Street Races - drinking - Smoking cigarettes - Woman of all kinds and looks (most any ways) - Music (mostly rock) - Action movies - Food (who doesn't) - Motocross (riding and driving)
Dislikes: - Some of the Tainted - Being lazy - Two faced people - When people don't listen - His father (don't have a good relationship with) - Gossip - Chick flicks - pop music - reading long ass books with bad endings
The Good Points: He is a charmer of the female population. He knows how to work each female. Most of the time he has just give this smirk with a raised eyebrow and that is it but occasionally he would have to work on and really do some charming.
He keeps his body in the best shape. He works out regularly and he even offers to help others to get in shape. Working out for him is therapy and a place that nothing can disappoint him.
Once someone gets to know him, they realize that he is a tough guy and has a hard wall up to keep people out but he is a caring and sweet guy. He likes to make sure that his friends and his sister are protected and taken care of.
He is very up with media culture from music, movies, clothing, and just about anything that makes him stand out. Which is probably why most of his clothing are from those outside of the country.
He is extremely protective of those around him. When someone he knows is in trouble he will do whatever he can to protect them and get his friends out of it. He feels like he does not have a weakness so it makes him do more risky things.
The Bad Points: Emilio can have a bad temper. When he is really pissed off he will break things but so far he has been just taking it out on the punching bag downstairs in the basement. He can also hold a grudge just like his sister for a long time so becareful.
He is extremely protective of those around him. When someone he knows is in trouble he will do whatever he can to protect them and get his friends out of it. He feels like he does not have a weakness so it makes him do more risky things.
Emilio is extremely cocky. He knows his body attracts girls. He knows he is handsome. He things he is one of the strongest guys out there since he had won a heavy weight championship. He also is cocky because of how much he has gotten his way in the past.
He may come off as an ass to many people. IF he doesn't like you he will not talk to you that much and he will treat that person badly. But it is hard to get to know him. The people who know him are the ones that have known him for a while and most have had prove themselves to Emilio.
Habits: He has a foul mouth. He does not care what people think about him so he will say whatever he wants to or feels to. He cusses a lot. He does not see what the problem is with cussing to him its just a word and it doesn't mean that its bad or good a word is a word.
He flirts too much. He was in a relationship once but it ended because of his excessive flirting. He says he can't help it... It's just the way he is and if a girl feels insecure around him because of his flirting then she is too clingy or doesn't trust him enough.
He smokes when things are bothering him. He has at least a pack on him maybe even more. Cigarettes is a stress reliever to him when he isn't near his punching bag.
Some may think he drinks too much. Its his way of relaxing and just hanging out though. He knows how to hold his liquor and many people don't understand how he can drink so much. He also drinks just for the hell of it.
Possessions/Obsessions/Other: He is obsessed with his looks and keeping his body in fit not just for wrestling but for the girls and to keep his image up.
His car that he had imported from the US. His 2007 Chevrolet Camaro that is painted yellow and had the inside remodeled to have only black and yellow.
His dog, Roman, who is a brown boxer. Emilio has had this dog since he was in highschool. Roman had gone traveling everywhere with him and Roman is his best friend.
His music is another key possession of him along with his work out equipment in the basement.
o r i g i n s
Place of Birth: Rome, Italy Family:
History:
Emilio Vincentio Marcuccilli was born on July 19th of 1986 at 11:30 pm. Shortly after his birth his father and his girlfriend whom was Emilio’s mother had separated and since Niccolo had a job and had more opportunities in bringing up Emilio the right way, he had won sole custody of Emilio. Niccolo had met many women before he had married and settled down with Nalia Marshall. Emilio was four at the time of the birth of his little sister Antonia Marshall who was his half sister. Niccolo and the family moved from Paris to San, where Nalia was given a house from the family there.
His child hood was a messy one. Emilio always felt like the kid that was forgotten. Everything was about Antonia and his father new wife. As time began to go on, Emilio grew to have a strong hate towards his father. He had tried everything from getting good grades to being on every sport possible and yet he felt like nothing was enough.
Over the summers of when school was out, Niccolo would take Emilio to Paris with him so Nalia and Toni could have time together. But Emilio didn’t want to go but had to go if he refused his father would punch him or even worse. The worst time was when Emilio was 12; his father had told him to pack a bag and Emilio refused. At this time Emilio was only around 5 foot 8 inches and his father still had the advantage. Niccolo had took off his dog chained necklace and strikes Emilio numerous times leaving tiny bruises and even cuts of open skin in some areas. Emilio had no idea why he kept getting beaten except for the fact that he was always getting in trouble or refusing to do what his father says. After that Emilio decided that he had better start changing his attitude or fight back. The answer he chooses was fight back. He began to constantly work out and spend many hours away from the house at a gym or just finding ways to build him up.
The summer that Emilio had turned sixteen, everything seemed to be going different. He had developed a relationship with his step mother and saw all the happiness and kindness that she had brought. He also began to grow close to Toni seeing that in a way they needed each other. Niccolo had just landed this big job that was going to be a solid stable job instead of just jumping from job to job. Niccolo had decided to take the whole family up to see the job in Paris but they never made it. Niccolo had fallen asleep at the wheel and crashed the car. Emilio blacked out for a few minutes but was brought back to his sister’s scream. He tried to calm her down and get her out but he couldn’t. He got himself out of the car and then ran as fast as he could to get help. They were a few miles out of the nearest town and Emilio ran there for help and got it. Only to feel disappointed that his new mom was in a coma.
After this incident, Niccolo had tried to repair his relationship with his oldest son. But Emilio would not let him get close enough to him to get hurt by him. Emilio at this time was very cold and harsh towards his father. Niccolo didn’t push his son into liking him and Emilio continued to push as much distant between each other as possible. Emilio knew that Niccolo, which is what he called his father now, was only doing this because of guilt and Emilio wanted his father to suffer for all the years that Emilio had suffered.
After highschool, Emilio moved out of the country and into the United States. He had quickly gotten a job as a wrestler and he continued to build himself up and his career was going great. He was the heavy weight champion until a few months after receiving the championship. Emilio was in the ring with someone who was after the championship but Emilio had not won that round due to the fact that the opposition had help by others and was hit with numerous other objects like folding chairs, and many other objects. But he had lost the championship. He went back into training harder and more intense. When he returned however the owner had decided that Emilio could not be a part of this industry anymore. Emilio disappointed and extremely pissed by this manner had punched the owner a few times in the mouth and stomach causing some serious damage. Emilio was charged with assault and was deported back to France. He went home to be with his sister Toni and was glad to hear that Niccolo was no where around her.
m i s c
RP Sample: Character : Antonia Marshall Site : Here
She looked at him with a raised eyebrow. "Trust me I am 100% girl." she said with a soft laugh and shook her head. "yeah its always funny and fun when people make assumptions and turn out to be wrong about it." She followed his eye sight over to a tiny dot in the sky. She could barely see it but either way it was still beautiful from where she stood.
"Ha ha ha... No we aren't designated. We just always go partying together. We have been doing it since highschool." She said with a slight laugh as she looked back at him. She couldn't help but smile at that remark he said. "What do you think I am that young where I need to have a designated party person?" She said with a smirk on her face.
After he said that she was tainted she thought about it as she looked off on the beach some. Am I? Not a normal human would be able to just tap into other people's emotions.... She begant to nod her head as she took a deep breath. "yeah I guess i am tainted. This just started happening about a few days after I turned 18. I have always just ignored it or just left the area and it would go away.
"I could have told you that you had amazing eyes." She said with a smirk on her face as she looked over at Soda. When she looked into his eyes she had to admit to herself that his eyes were melt worthy. Lately it had been so hard to find a guy with eyes that just stood out and made a girl a little quick in the knees. She bite on her bottom lip some as he talked about the lights. "Sorry again... Maybe I can make it up to you one day or something." She said with a half smile on her face and a half smirk.
She shrugged her shoulders and moved her head slightly to the side when he asked if they were freaks. "No... we are basically all the same at least that is what my brother says. I just think that we have a better advantage to the world then those who are untainted." She said as she was just thinking out loud. She normally never did that but every once in a while when she felt comfortable around a person she would just speak her mind. "Yeah I can really feel what others are feeling." She smiled adn raised her eyes brows as she looked down at the ground. "Yeah I would feel the anger and I would also act angry even if I have no idea why I am angry.... And that is the other reason why I have been a little bit on the low side of parties. All those ummm emotions and other emotions I feel and act. So its kinda hard to act like you are completely content when you feel a couple making out near you." She said turning a little red on her face as she talked about that experience. That was her first time at a party when this ability or whatever started up. Character Model: Randy Orton
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Post by anna on Feb 16, 2008 19:41:03 GMT
Hey! Good app, you just need to edit a few things that I picked out. PM me or post it here when you're done - Can you remove all extra coding from your application please? Like, get rid of the extra blockquotes you used/the links to the tattoos (describe them instead)
- Can you at least name his mother? Even if he himself doesn't know it, you should because you're the... character mastermind.
- Little parts on your history make no sense, such as, WHERE did they live? In San? Mariselle? After his dad married Toni's mother, did he just move them all to San? Or did they leave somewhere else? And can you add WHY his father beat him? Did he not like the boy because he reminded him of his ex wife? Or... just something.
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Post by anna on Feb 18, 2008 3:22:56 GMT
APPROVED! Welcome to _TC. Since you have read the rules and the background story, your next stop should be The Model Claim to make sure no one else can use your model, Relationship Plots to build yourself a reputation, and then there’s just one thing left to do…
Have fun!
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