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Post by Nona Constantine on Jan 19, 2008 17:21:22 GMT
Things she DOES/PRACTISES:
Writing
Reading
Swimming
Snow boarding
Tennis
Ballet (past)
Gymnastics (past)
Ice Skating
Thinks she LIKE/ADMIRES/ doesn’t do:
Art
Photography
Ballet (present)
You’ve removed all music from her personality.
If this is all accurate, let me know here.
Another thing I just spotted… your positive points contradict your negatives. You say she’s kind, shy, charming, sweet, caring…. AND she’s stubborn, cranky, and has a temper? Could you specify what makes her cranky and stubborn that the rest of the time she’s kind and charming?
You know, characters don’t have to be EVERYTHING a person can be. You have 3 characters now and I’ve already seen some of their traits matching others. Why not make ONE character a cranky, stubborn one, another character a charming, caring, sweet one, etc. Diversity is good, especially when you’ve already given yourself the opportunity for it.
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Post by nicki on Jan 19, 2008 19:21:04 GMT
What She Does - Writes, Ice Skates, Plays Violin, Sings, Snow Boarding {only when its a family trip though}, Swimming {whenever she can get the chance to}.
What She Likes/Doesn't Do - Photography, Snow Boarding, Art, Ballet, Gymnastics, Piano, Tennis.
What She Did - Ballet & Gymnastics.
I've changed it & thats what she does/likes/doesn't do/did.
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Post by brandon on Jan 21, 2008 18:48:27 GMT
APPROVED! Welcome to _TC. Since you have read the rules and the background story, your next stop should be The Model Claim to make sure no one else can use your model, Relationship Plots to build yourself a reputation, and then there’s just one thing left to do…
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